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Picture Book Manuscript Critiques

You can now have your picture book manuscripts personally critiqued by Verla Kay.

NOTE:  Critique Service is open.

You may email your manuscript to Verla as soon as a confirmation email that your payment has been received has been sent to you by Verla. By return email you will receive (usually within one week) a full critique of your manuscript. This will include some or all of the following:

"Overview" comments about your story concerning its appropriateness for today's market and the age of children for which you are writing

Assistance and or comments about the pacing and image possibilities of your story

Line by line editing of the story itself

Assistance with rhyming and rhythm when appropriate


Special introductory prices for this critique service will be as follows: (These introductory rates will go up once the service is fully operational.)

300 words or less = $50

301 to 500 words = $75

501 to 750 words = $100

751 to 1000 words = $125

1000 to 2000 words = $200

Note: Word count is for the story only. It does not include your name and/or byline or the title of the story.

If you would like to take advantage of this wonderful new service, send Verla Kay an email and put CRITIQUE SERVICE in the subject line. Payment will be via PayPal. NOTE: Do not click on the Buy Now button until you have set the drop-down menu to the correct amount for your manuscript.