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As fast as greased lightning...
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August 09, 2012, 06:20 PM »
Well, not that--it's kind of a cliche.
But I need cowboy slang for: "She rode (her horse) as fast as a.....(something)"
Any ideas? Thanks, in advance!!
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as fast as a spooked rattlesnake?
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...as fast a Gila monster running on hot desert sand.
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August 11, 2012, 05:23 PM »
Galloped is the correct term for the fastest gait of a horse, so maybe rather than saying she rode her horses as fast as... you could say she galloped...
off into the sunset
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...as a greased tornader.
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Lizards are pretty fast--maybe something with that?
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August 11, 2012, 06:13 PM »
...a jackrabbit with its tail on fire
...a spooked salamander
...a hornet in a hailstorm (doesn't make a whole lotta sense, but I like the sound of it:))
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...as an arrow shooting through the praire wind.
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...fast as a preacher's tongue
....fast as greased gossip
....fast as a late-to-dinner cougar
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Thanks! I see a couple I like. But keep them coming.
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Faster than a tumbleweed in a hurricane.
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Quote from: KatyD on August 11, 2012, 08:56 PM
Faster than a tumbleweed in a hurricane.
Ooo, that's a good one. Maybe a tumbleweed in a tornado?
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striking rattlesnake
a windmill in a thunderstorm
a roadrunner being chased by a wiley coyote
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as fast as a steam engine
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August 12, 2012, 08:43 AM »
Lots of good ideas here - but I'm wondering about the context. Is she racing away from something? Is she just going fast because she likes to? Is the horse running away with her? There's a big diff between galloping "away from" or "to" something and I think you'd want your phrase to speak to that.
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