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Offline EspressoChick

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writing a pb in second person?
« on: July 21, 2012, 05:10 PM »
Hello BlueBoarders, :)

I wondered if there are pb's written in second person narrative? Are pb's typically only written in third person? I am writing a pb, and for now the draft is in second person. I could change it, but I wasn't sure if second person narrative would be accepted by an editor. I thank you for your time and welcome your thoughts.

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Offline LeslieG

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 06:13 PM »
I haven't found it to be very common, but when done well (like anything else!) it can work fine. I just read Michael Black's A Pig Parade is a Terrible Idea, and his use of it is hilarious. I'd just be careful of being didactic with it.

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2012, 07:15 PM »
The "If You Give A Mouse A Cookie" books are in second person, and like was mentioned, if done well it can work   (no reason for the cherries, just like them!) :cherries:
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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2012, 06:51 AM »
When a Dragon Moves In is also in the second person. And also (I think) Is Your Buffalo Ready for Kindergarten.

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #4 on: July 22, 2012, 07:17 AM »
VAMPIRINA BALLERINA is in second person, although you won't be able to see it until August 7.  But eeeeep!  That's two weeks!
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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #5 on: July 22, 2012, 09:11 AM »
DON'T LET THE PIGEON DRIVE THE BUS, by Mo Willems is written in second person (as are a number of his books I believe)
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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2012, 10:58 PM »
Just checked out a new PB from the library, and it's written in second person. It's called WHAT TO DO IF AN ELEPHANT STANDS ON YOUR FOOT (Dial, 2012). Really cute!
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Offline Christine B.

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2012, 11:37 PM »
I was thinking of two classics -- THE LITTLE MOUSE, THE RED RIPE STRAWBERRY, AND THE BIG HUNGRY BEAR, and THERE'S A MONSTER AT THE END OF THIS BOOK.

I guess they are technically first person but I think they might be sort of what you're looking for in that the narrator is speaking directly to the reader, telling the reader what to do.

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #8 on: August 01, 2012, 02:58 PM »
I couldn't help adding another one I just read by Michael Ian Black, The Purple Kangaroo. The entire text is a conversation with the reader, with the narrator trying to prove he can read minds. Very clever, very cute!

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Re: writing a pb in second person?
« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2012, 07:02 PM »
I think Shel Silverstein's Giraffe and a Half is also in second person.
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