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My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« on: July 05, 2012, 11:57 PM »
So excited! Used to be: The Patron Saint of Beans

http://emilymurdoch.wordpress.com/2012/06/28/if-you-find-me-arc-giveaway-links-and-insider-surprise/

Been a whirlwind week! I meant to share sooner. Some ARC giveaways are still open.

Hope everyone is well, and writin' up a storm!

 :flowers2

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2012, 01:41 PM »
Very nice! Congrats!

And I like that you switched your name and the blurb. I think it looks better that way. :-)
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 06:48 PM »
The model's direct gaze invites you to pick up the book. Congratulations!
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2012, 07:15 PM »
Thanks, Katy!

Me too. I think the title/name block is sacred space. : )

Thanks, Vijaya!

Definitely something going on with (and behind) those eyes! Fits the story perfectly!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2012, 08:30 PM »
Oooh, I love the new title! Congrats.
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2012, 08:34 PM »
Thanks, Kell!

I love it, too. : )

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 08:53 PM »
That is a really striking cover! You must be very pleased.
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #7 on: July 06, 2012, 08:57 PM »
It looks great, Emily! I have to say I was a huge fan of the original title as well. :) Glad they listened to you about moving your name up below the title. That's where it belongs. Congrats!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 09:00 PM »
I love the new title! It really draws me in and makes me start to wonder...

Great cover, too!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #9 on: July 07, 2012, 12:02 PM »
Congratulations! I think the final version is fantastic, and actually prefer the new title.

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #10 on: July 08, 2012, 11:46 AM »
Congratulations! Looks great! And I do like the yellow letters better. Title is very intriguing too.
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #11 on: July 08, 2012, 03:23 PM »
Aww, thanks everyone!

I love the old title, too. And yet, I love the new title, too. : )

It's all coming together beautifully. It's just such an amazing feeling, watching all the steps in the process, and beyond, all the way back to the query stage, add up to the here and now. : )

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #12 on: July 08, 2012, 05:29 PM »
Love it! Creepy and intriguing. What does the blurb say?

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #13 on: July 09, 2012, 12:43 PM »
Really nice! I prefer the yellow lettering of your  name after the title, too. The pink didn't seem to go with the provocative nature of the photo and forest. Congratulations!
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #14 on: July 09, 2012, 12:51 PM »
Looks great!
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2012, 01:47 PM »
What a wonderful metamorphosis -- and the cover is haunting!  :yay
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2012, 02:26 PM »
Very lovely! The cover does a great job of conveying the feeling and atmosphere. :)
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #17 on: July 09, 2012, 03:26 PM »
NICE! I like it!!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #18 on: July 09, 2012, 07:03 PM »
I've been watching this one since I read about it over on querytracker months ago! I'd love to read the pubcrawl interview with Mandy, but couldn't find it. Am I lame?

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #19 on: July 09, 2012, 10:15 PM »
The old title is definitely more quirky and fun-sounding, but it would never go with this this cover. The new title goes much better. I think the new title was a wise choice. Because the overall package is absolutely striking!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #20 on: July 10, 2012, 04:36 PM »
I really can't wait to get my hands on this, Emily! I loved the original title, but I think it sounded more MGish. Beautiful cover, congrats!


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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #21 on: July 10, 2012, 04:37 PM »
Great cover and it fits the title so well. Exciting!

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #22 on: July 25, 2012, 05:40 PM »
The link to Mandy's post is:

http://www.publishingcrawl.com/2012/06/28/if-you-find-me-cover-reveal-interview-and-giveaway/#comments

Here's the blurb:

THERE ARE SOME THINGS YOU CAN'T LEAVE BEHIND ...

A broken-down camper hidden deep in a national forest is the only home fifteen-year-old Carey can remember. The trees keep guard over her threadbare existence, with the one bright spot being Carey's younger sister, Jenessa, who depends on Carey for her very survival. All they have is each other, as their mentally ill mother comes and goes with greater frequency. Until that one fateful day their mother disappears for good, and the girls are found by their father, a stranger, and taken to re-enter the "normal" life of school, clothes and boys.

Now, Carey must come to terms with the truth of why their mother spirited them away ten years ago, while haunted by a past that won't let her go ... a dark past that hides many a secret, including the reason Jenessa hasn't spoken a word in over a year. Carey knows she must keep her sister close, and her secrets even closer, or risk watching her new life come crashing down.

IF YOU FIND ME is a riveting mix of psychological tension and page-turning mystery that asks profound questions about family, truth and love.

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Thanks so much, everyone, for celebrating this with me. Reading the replies today, reminds me to stay happy and excited at a time when I also feel scared and nervous!

I agree that the "whole package" -- story, title and cover -- really came together, nicely! And, I saw the ARC -- my pub sent me a picture of the book lying open with the back and front cover showing, and it is *glorious*.

They all did a wonderful job. You can see the pub loves it as much as I do. It's a lovely feeling. : )

ARCs come out in August ... gulp.

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #23 on: July 25, 2012, 05:47 PM »
Thank you, Tracy!

And I've been interested in your book, too -- so funny -- when I saw the title (which is *gorgeous*, by the way) in your sig just now, I did a double take!

I thought, Hey, wait a minute -- there's that book! : )

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #24 on: July 25, 2012, 06:12 PM »
Thanks, Em! Sadly, my title might change, too. We'll see.

I read Mandy's post and now I'm excited to read IF YOU FIND ME all over again :)
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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #25 on: July 25, 2012, 06:49 PM »
What a travesty it would be to lose your title, Tracy. I LOVE it! So lyrical, evocative and ORIGINAL.

I do hope, if you have to change the title, you love the new one. My advice would be to be as involved as you can in brainstorming alternatives.

Don't be shy about offering up new suggestions. And, although it's sad to have to change a title you love, it's really about marketing and the pub wanting your book to do its absolute best.

Big hugs for you.

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #26 on: July 25, 2012, 10:21 PM »
P.S.

I just wanted to add, for those still in the trenches, who read my story on PubCrawl and end up feeling sad or so far removed from your eventual success:

I had a previous agent that was a bad fit, and a ms on sub for ten months, prior to IYFM, that didn't sell.

So, don't give up. And I mean that literally, all cheerleading aside. I know the agony. I know how tough it is. But, you never know what's just around the bend, as long as you keep pushing forward. : )

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #27 on: July 26, 2012, 02:15 AM »
Thanks again, Em. I would be sad to lose it :( But I will take your advice should it happen :)
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« Reply #28 on: July 26, 2012, 08:06 AM »
Belatedly catching up on Good News, and linked to see your cover--terrific! Evocative, mysterious. . . and blessings on your designer for a cover portrait that doesn't look like a stock model photo.

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Re: My new title and cover reveal! If You Find Me
« Reply #29 on: July 26, 2012, 09:36 AM »
WOW....love the new title AND the cover photo...mesmerizing!

Congrats & hugs, Jodi  :love4:
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